You’re quite welcome! I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it.

I too wish I could have explored Tan more, as well as Naema. A big problem I had though was that some protagonists were just too powerful for their own good.

I also appreciate you tying up the story that was satisfying while still retaining the sense that this world will continue on.

I feel like Katherine and her body swapping wasn’t easily forgotten, so I was not surprised she survived but I was happy that she did. I liked all the characters, I thought they were all acting as they should have.

I would have liked more time with Tan and his powers. I feel like he did not get much screen time, it felt like a big leap at the end with how he used it at the end.

I definitely would love another story set in this world.

Thank you! I’ll consider that a success.

Hmm? Makes what?

My apologies for ignoring this for so long. Email notifications haven’t been working this whole time.

Of course, anything I could have said would have been telling…